Cognitive Consciousness through the form of poetry...

ok, so i see that most everyone comes through here. i know there have been various music threads, im sure, but no one covered hiphop. and i know most of you are like “hiphop, oh you mean black men rapping about bling and cars” no no, i DONT mean that. if any of you have ever listened to hiphop, then you know waht im talking about. and im not even talking about the street poetry, like J5, or Heiroglyphics, or blackalicious, im talking about REAL, heighten your consciousness hiphop. if ANY of you are into poetry, i suggest you read the next line…

Robeson -

I slept once
the dream has yet to end
it was on a purple evening such as this
the curtains had been pulled by a hand un-attched
i lay proped on a pillow of eagle feathers, on a couch, framed with the skeletons of my uncles, and great uncles.
I did not intend to close my eyes, but when i did…

the night is falling on the moist palms of children, to weak to bare it weight. the stars are visibly breathing, in fact they almost look as if they are chewing gum.
the moon is crecented on both sides, while its center remains unseen.
i can faintly hear my mother calling me, or is that my sister singing songs of the railroad.

Roads center’d in a reflection of a floating mirror. but then i realize that the mirror is not floating, but being pulled by a white horse, in a great golden chariot.
The horse ahs humna feet, i look down at my feet, and they are hooves, when i look up it is no longer night.

The sun covers the entire sky, as if it has been stretched to reach all corners. Flames are visible, but not threatening.
A girl brushes my knee with her tail, shes earing pink overalls, and rollerblades.
she signals for me to follow her, as soon as i take a step towards her, im flying.

there are rocky mountains below me, i decide to land in a small settlement between mountains.
a mna walks up to me, he is my father, but he introduces himself to me as John Gault.
I ask him if he is there Reverand John Gault, we begin to say the lords prayer together…
The whole world seems to join in, the mountains have mouths.

i am standing at an alter, it takes a second for me to realize taht im getting married
the woman beside me, my bride is sitting on an indian silk pillow, shes holding a white umbrella over her head, i cannot see her.
i keep whispering to her, “its ok love, its ok love” and she keeps shushing me, and shushing me

i am wearing a backpack, i decide to take it off, its filled with coloring books, and i keep thinking, “i have to be done in time to pick saturn up from school, i have to be done in time to pick saturn up from school”

my darling saturn, i seem to break your heart daily, how could i ever neglect to hug you, you are a planet hugged by a rainbow, for give me, sometiems i become so consumed in the trevails of my own heart, taht i neglect yours. there is no greater crime, i will enver commit it again, for there is no other adultry, you are my child, gods gift to the world, gods will be done, i love you.

Wine

The new wine is dying on the vine
How much must you age before you’re ageless?
Align yourself with the divine
Allow your inner sage to burn you rageless
'Cause I find through testaments of time
There is not space for time within your mind
If you’re looking for yourself, yourself you’ll find
Through your crystal of your spirit
You’ll inherit the divine
You are God, you best believe
Don’t waste your time down on your knees
It’s everybody for themselves
You are the fire and the cross
It’s our loss
Collective soul, collective wealth
The new wine is dying on the vine
How much must you age before you’re ageless?
Align yourself with the divine
Allow your inner sage to burn you rageless
'Cause I find through testaments of time
There is not space for time within your mind
If you’re looking for yourself, yourself you’ll find
Through your crystal of your spirit
You’ll inherit the divine
You are God, you best believe
Don’t waste your time down on your knees
It’s everybody for themselves
You are the fire and the cross
It’s our loss
Collective soul, collective wealth
So do you know how I feel tonight?
Now can’t you see I’m surreal tonight?
See how I shine I’m a star
Oh yea
Now do you know who you are tonight?
So do you know how I feel tonight?
Now can’t you see I’m surreal tonight?
See how I shine I’m a star
Oh yea
Now do you know who you are tonight?
I’m every daughter and son
That’s like a bible and gun
Peacocked and ready aim as steady as a ray of the sun
My ammunition: intuition full eclipse (clips) from my lung
Son you could never guess what planet I’m from
My MC name is my first name
My birth name
Alias is all of us
Soul of us, the fall of us
To surely come when we deny it
Loudest nigga gets quiet
His inner peace is a riot
Sell your soul if you wanna, but that don’t mean I’ma buy it
See, I’ve been concious of your nonsense
Stay offensive and quiet
And I ain’t gonna lie it
Be too hard to deny it
I ain’t from your block and never had to deal with your shit
Never had a glock, never kept it real with no bid
And when I saw a nigga like you, son I practically hid
‘Cause you did what you did
And I wasn’t the kid
Don’t give a fuck now, I’ll be the first one to player hate
The eye of the needle set the record straight
And I retialate
Retialate
Retaliate
Retaliate
And I be fishin on
That same star you be wishin on
Make your move, son you know the missions’ on

So never question who I am, God knows
And I know God personally
In fact he lets me call him me
In fact he lets me call him me
So never question who I am, God knows
And I know God personally
In fact she lets me call her me
In fact she lets me call her me

So do you know how I feel tonight?
Now can’t you see I’m surreal tonight?
See how I shine I’m a star
Oh yea
Now do you know who you are tonight?
So do you know how I feel tonight?
Now can’t you see I’m surreal tonight?
See how I shine I’m a star
Oh yea
Now do you know who you are tonight?
So do you know how I feel tonight?
Now can’t you see I’m surreal tonight?
See how I shine I’m a star
Oh yea
Now do you know who you are tonight?

I could recite the grass on a hill
And memorize the moon
I know the cloud forms of love by heart
And have brought tears to the eye of a storm
My memory banks
Vaults of autumn forests and amazon river banks
And I have screamed them into sunsets
That echo in earthquakes
Shadows have been my spotlight
As I monologue with night
And dialogue the days
Seliliquies of wind and breeze
Applauded by sun rays
We put language in zoos
To observe caged thought
And tossed peanuts and p-funk at intellect
Motherfuckers think these are metahors, I speak what I see
All words and worlds are metaphors of me

My life is authored by the moon, footprints written in soil
The fountain pen of martian men noveling human toil
And yes, the soil speaks highly of me
When earth seeds root me
Poet tree
Now, maybe I’m too serious
Too good to hear
Too matter
Though I’m riddled with the reason of the sun
A stand-up comet with the audience of lungs
This body of laughter, is it with me or at me
Hue more (humor) or less though genders mute
And the punchline has this lifeline at it’s root
I’m a star, this life’s the suburbs, I commute

So do you know how I feel tonight?
Now can’t you see I’m surreal tonight?
See how I shine I’m a star
Oh yea
Now do you know who you are tonight?
So do you know how I feel tonight?
Now can’t you see I’m surreal tonight?
See how I shine I’m a star
Oh yea
Now do you know who you are tonight?

for any of you who knwo Saul’s work, you know what i mean, Saul Williams everyone…

Thanks for sharing, that first poems sounds like it came directly out of a DJ. Great stuff

Wow, yeah Saul Williams is awesome! I’ve only heard a few of his works, one on TV and one on the Blackalicious album ‘Blazing Arrow’. He features in an epic 9 minute track and does a monologue. If you don’t have that album, check it out.

What Saul does isnt rapping, true, but I would argue that there are plenty of rappers out there who know-the-ledge alright. In fact I would say wisdom is what separates the great from the wack, when it comes to mic science. If I may quote Vast Aire of Cannibul Ox (one of my favourites…):

“Yo, birds of the same feather flock together
Congested on a majestic * cuts off * no! no! no!
My feathers and flames are one skin
Hallowed be Thy name in the beginning there was no sin
We in the ninth inning, and I’m God body trying to win
Flying against the wind
But now my shell is weightless and fireproof
But the truth is I’m proof of living fire
I’m not made of organics, not even wires
Just felt my body light up and heard the choir
See to the common fowl the phoenix is Sire
Most high of all things to ever have wings
Existence is struggle, resistance is futile
Meanwhile we now possess the power of ten suns
To transcend and elevate into one
Famine, disease and senseless dieing is done
Pigeon bird got a breath left
Heart beat no more
Phoenix bird morph and we live off the G-force”

Jest: I think you’d really, really like ‘Insight’… you heard of him? Album ‘The Blast Radius’ is amazing.

And do you write lyrics? If you scroll down a bit you’ll notice a rap thread…

I am someone that rants a lot about how bad rap and hip-hop are, but I do admit there is some very good stuff in the genre. Jurrasic5, NER*D, Outkast, Bigboy, even Wu Tang Clan and the members of it are good. The main problem that the genre has is coming up with fresh material. It is very true that there is way too many rap songs about cars, money, and champagne. The groups above are all good because they are dynamic. They are not repetitve and they actually have meaning to them.

just so you know not every one thinks that. you rae trying to say that people people how dont like hip hop are racit, witch in fact makes you look like a racit. Get off your soap box.

I dont like hip hop.

I’m still trying to figure out why this was marked “Seriously important”.

Good question… I changed it now.

People, please don´t use subject descriptions like that just to catch some attention. Don´t you remember the story of the little boy who always cried “There is a wolf!”… ? :wink:
And it´s just easier to read the forum if you now what a topic is about when reading the headling.

edit:
Did someone else change the title the same moment I did? :confused:

tapir

No, tapir … you are dreaming :tongue:

I added hiphop to it to save people’s time…

I still think the title needs to be more descriptive. :neutral:

atlantean, can you please edit the title to something less “attention grabbing” and more “descriptive.” Thanks. :smile:

sorry about all that, but i do believe that hiphop, besides reading, and various other facits, is one of the easiest, and most rewarding ways to heighten your consciousness.

noah23…

we all know deep down that one day we all will just…

eat resistance
sleep resistance
reep resistance
resist

check the junglistic jibber jaw
at the drum and bass seminar
with the troubadour peep the metaphor
less is more when you’re at the resevoir
glass half empty glass half full
keep your eyes out for the crystal skulls
rock the riddim with thoughts intelligent
carve my name in it on the wet cement
i triple the syllable with a titanium telescope
medicine vehicle then i defeated the simpletons
taking a chance on the nanobot bicycle
delegate melting your element into a vacuous nebula
gravity gripping up everything
retina spotting the obvious entity
coagulate caligula
boiling point gwan culminate
sustain the pulserate with a dubplate
its not too late we still got time
they could never kill the shine
triple space the darkness is
building a metropolis
a shrine upon the fingertip
heaven sent specimen mescaline pyramid
it never stops, the pod splits
nanobot apocalypse
theres a paradox in the way we walk
somethings got to give
and i’mma gonna come upon the micrphone
and never ever stop it with the force of a comet
or meteoroid, buildestroy microchips ahoy killjoy
sitting duck sigmund freud
pon the couch and i’m bouncing
millenium falcon countdown two thousand
move mountains
whistle heavy rocks into position
and channel the mandelbrot algorythm
bout to hit em with a total eclipse
flow with the script its the vocal abyss
resistance is fertile wild for the night
website megabyte dendrite
peptide nematode enzyme anecdote
cranial hijack anti climax
saphire amethyst, try and censor this
america is the terrorist
there it is plain to see
negativity cant damage we
we reiterate data and vedic integrity ready
for whatever penalty buries we

eat resistance
sleep resistance
reep resistance
resist

all eye seeing supreme neo elohim being
the premium paramecium never ceases releasing
amnesia magnesium
got your brain freezin
and you aint even know theres paint on your sleeve and
the train is leaving on this fateful evening
return to the ancient season
veritcal mosaic
certainly plague language serve you to the curb of the pavement
but dont be worried or anxious
i’ll murder you painless
with a nervous arrangement
oh check it the current is dangerous
everthing is in its place
circulates and leaves a trace
disintegrating and reapearing
with the fate that we keep fearing
tearing down like all of them walls
remember that love conquers all
phenobarbitol this the actual
drop the waterfall keep it casual
this is the art of doing nothing
keep it moving keep it bumping
the manner in which i pimp comes
to prominence over the elongated course
of a trillion light years
bending time diodes and crystaline structures
the number cruncher puffing the chumba wamba
up in the tundra
thunda clap thunda cat riding on a hovercraft
mustard gas keep it under raps
i’m choppin the track like a lumberjack